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Clare

I Loved.

Saturday 15th July 2023 10:24 pm

I loved

As though

There was no

Other reason

To live

I loved

Until I had no more

To give

You took

Until I no longer

Had the will

To live.

C.K.23

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Comments

Tue 18th Jul 2023 10:42

Thanks, Stephen. I appreciate your comment very much.
Thanks for the likes. 😁

Sun 16th Jul 2023 08:43

This could be a definition of 'visceral', Clare. A powerful, physical poem. Romantic, as well.

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