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Her Habitat (2011)

A clean, cream carpet,
Glittering glass: a squeaky carapace.
Grand, old, oak bookcase,
Slide in spines. Covers carefully confined -
Embraced between the dust-free shelves. Enshrined.
Polish the coffee table to a gloss,
With wax from bees – cold cream for deceased trees.

The toilet protrudes from plaster like a
Porcelain-capped tooth.
My pearly bath, each nacreous tile agleam,
And shower pod: a pristine, plastic dream.
Such taps! Platinum sculptures,
Which rupture
The shining, sacred sepulchre of sink:
My marvellously marbled monolith.
I cup my hands to drink.
Reflections: the twinkling of insect eyes,
Tiny twitches – like the dying limbs of flies.

But round the wooden ridge of window frame,
Seen through the lens of glazed, pellucid pane,
There cluster lace-edged knots of spider seeds –
Skeins stuffed with squirling, squirming, thronging beads:
Silk sacks of legs and throbbing abdomens.

A vision: vestal virgin-bottled bleach,
Between the sponges, cans and sprays I reach.

Candyfloss cocoons, festering festoons,
Slashed at by searing, slicing, squirting spears.
The atomised elixir saturates.
Finally, furious and nauseous,

A big one breaks out,

She, sopping, writhing, stabbing at the air,
Flails fitfully and spirals from her lair.

Fast fading – and her babies all at rest –
The chill, grave thought: How fragile is a nest?

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Charlie Preston

Wed 26th Jul 2023 14:01

Thanks everyone. How lovely to see some familiar faces on here.

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Tom

Tue 25th Jul 2023 14:19

I really enjoyed this one Charlie. Great writing.

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Tony Hill

Tue 25th Jul 2023 10:26

Really like this poem, Charlie, not least because it displays a pleasure in the sound of words. Full of wonderful imagery. I also like the flexibility of your rhyme scheme. Great read. Tony

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 25th Jul 2023 10:09

Long time no see Charlie!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 25th Jul 2023 09:56

A very well-crafted poem, Charlie.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 25th Jul 2023 09:24

Thanks Charlie.
I have serious concerns about the vast amount of money we spend on poisonous chemicals used around our home in the name of "cleanliness", and about its effects on the environment.

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