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Soldier Boys

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Here comes my son, the soldier boy;

He’ll always be my pride and joy.

I was so proud they would deploy

Someone so young, someone so young.

 

His face seemed hardly out of school;

Though he was kind and broke no rule,

They knew he was nobody’s fool,

For one so young, for one so young.

 

A picture in his uniform,

A buttoned coat to keep him warm,

He raced towards the coming storm,

My boy so young, my boy so young.

 

They said he stood up strong and brave,

So many wounded did he save;

No praise nor medals did he crave.

He was so young, he was so young.

 

Our country’s flag is neatly draped

Upon his coffin, squarely shaped,

And all the locals came and gaped

At one so young, at one so young.

 

He’s passed the crossroads of his days;

Resuming their defiant ways,

His pals continue to amaze,

But are so young, but are so young.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Aug 2023 06:49

Thank you very much, John.

And thanks to Nigel, Hugh, Stephen, Pete, K Lynn, Purplemoon.

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John Coopey

Tue 15th Aug 2023 21:58

One of your very best, Stephen. You are the War Poet for these troubled times.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 15th Aug 2023 21:15

Thank you so much for all the positive comments - Manish, Graham, Steve, Tom and John Gilbert. And thanks to Purplemoon for your like.

I think you're right, Graham. It doesn't really matter which side he was on. The youth of Ukraine and Russia is being sacrificed in this senseless conflict.

'So young.' It comes home to you when you visit war cemetries and look at the ages on the graves. So many lives cut short. Wasted.

Thank you all again.

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John Gilbert Ellis

Tue 15th Aug 2023 16:02

Very good. Agree with Steve White, the 'so young' refrain builds through this and the last one signposts to inevitable replay.

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Tom

Tue 15th Aug 2023 13:51

Wow, Stephen this is great. Very powerful.

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Steve White

Tue 15th Aug 2023 12:34

Excellent, Stephen.

The "so young"s fall heavier with every verse and every re-reading.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 15th Aug 2023 12:26

One thing strikes me about this important piece Stephen and that is the unidentified woman in the picture. She could be Ukrainian or Russian? Frankly it doesn’t matter. The tragedy is borne by both sides at grass roots level. If only the could hit Putin!! and stop this senseless mess.

As always finger on the pulse 👍

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 15th Aug 2023 10:50

Yet another masterpiece, Stephen G. I feel so lucky to read your poems. They're so perfect, emotional and touching, this one's one of my favourite.
Thank you for this.

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