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The Youngest of the Dead

(On August 13, 2023, a 23-day old baby girl was killed by Russian shelling in the Ukrainian village of Shiroka Balka. Six other people were killed in the attack.)

 

There’s an old saying: ‘live for the day’.

I managed to do that. Twenty-three times.

And then – you probably know what happened.

You may ask the question: ‘am I angry?’

'For missing out on the next eighty years?'

Well, perhaps, like lambs in the slaughterhouse,

I know no better. At what you don’t know,

Don’t expect, you don’t miss. So that’s all right.

Except, I do know life was all I had,

And now it has gone. I’m not that stupid.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 25th Aug 2023 11:01

Point taken, Uilleam. And thanks to Kevin and Nigel for liking.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 11:59

The
"senselessness of war".

Sadly, it makes perfect sense to some;
follow the money and power.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 07:16

Thank you for your generous comments, Graham and John Gilbert, and to John C, Steve and Hélène for liking.

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John Gilbert Ellis

Mon 21st Aug 2023 19:41

A moving poem Stephen, and one I’ll not forget easily. Make an incredible point in a very stark way

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John Gilbert Ellis

Mon 21st Aug 2023 11:01

A moving poem Stephen, and one I’ll not forget easily. Make an incredible point in a very stark way

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 21st Aug 2023 09:41

The first person style makes this an altogether piercing piece Stephen. Difficult to say more!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 20th Aug 2023 20:41

Thank you for kind comments, Greg and Keith, and to Kevin for liking.

A tragic moment like this somehow crystallises the madness and senselessness of war. Whatever the wider political considerations, it has to stop soon.

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keith jeffries

Sun 20th Aug 2023 13:54

This poem encapsulates the horror and senselessness of war. Well composed. Raw in content. A very good poem to make the reader sit up. Thank you for this,
Keith

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Greg Freeman

Sun 20th Aug 2023 13:43

Brilliant poem, Steve, crystallising this vile madness.

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