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Gallipoli

Gallipoli

 

The merchantman cautiiously moved through the waters of the Dardanelles.

Fierce fighting on land and the beaches had reached a crescendo.

The crew was alert to artillery fire.

Bill Dawson a Mercantile Marine Officer stood on deck.

The scene before him was one of unremitting battle.

British soldiers were in retreat.

In the sea they held their rifles aloft with both hands.

A voice cried out ´Bill Dawson, it´s me........

Bill looked below into the muddy coastal waters.

He saw a man he knew from his home town in Cumberland.

´Help me Bill´,came the desparate plea.

Bill immediately recognised the man.

The ship maintained its course. Little could be done.

The enemies guns were trained on all the vessels.

The two men clearly beheld each other.

One helpless and the other in distress.

Within minutes it was over as the ship moved relentlessly on.

An encounter which brought horror and guilt.

Bill stood and wept, for himself and for his compatriot.

For the remainder of his life Bill was haunted.

It became a recurring nightmare.

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keith jeffries

Wed 6th Sep 2023 19:27

Thank you for all your comments.
Keith

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Dawn

Wed 6th Sep 2023 13:42

war. this is the war for us all. Every stranger is a neighbor we cannot save. thank you.

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Martin Elder

Thu 31st Aug 2023 18:40

A truly haunting and well told tale. Thank you for sharing this Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 07:28

A tragic and well-expressed story, Keith. The structuring of each line as an individual sentence gives it a haunting rhythm.

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