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NO BETTER ENDING

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A re-post harking back to the final days we spent in our last house, where a man could potter in a shed and burn logs in a firepit.  For fun.

 

As quiet closes end of day

When evening’s calm has gripped us

I set a fire and in it lay

Dried logs of eucalyptus.

 

A billowing blue smokiness

And flames begin to dance;

The leaves and trees stand motionless,

No breeze to break their trance.

 

The silence of the setting scene

Occasionally lifts

From traffic from the A19

And screeching of the swifts.

 

Of all the ways I might desire

To welcome dusk’s descending

I’d choose this garden and this fire;

There is no better ending.

🌷(8)

◄ THE DARK ARTS

FAREWELL MY FRIEND ►

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John Coopey

Thu 24th Aug 2023 15:46

Thankyou, Tom.

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Tom

Thu 24th Aug 2023 10:02

Really enjoyed this, John.

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John Coopey

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 16:42

I did indeed nod off watching the flames, MC. And thanks for the Likes Clare, Kevin and Holden.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 14:53

Restful and rewarding.

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John Coopey

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 08:33

Thankyou, Stephen and Graham. It was a moment of weakness, Graham. I’ll try to let it not happen again.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 07:20

Worthy of the place, I think, John.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 22nd Aug 2023 00:03

Look here JC, you stick to the funny stuff and leave this sort of lovely enigmatic nonsense to us others! Deal?

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John Coopey

Mon 21st Aug 2023 23:22

I don't like to get too type-cast, Greg. See what's happened to Ken Barlow.
And thanks for the Like, Helene.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 21st Aug 2023 23:16

Blimey! That's a beautiful poem, John.

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