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Great North Run, 2023

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They poured out of Haymarket Metro,

streamed up the hill through

the university towards the Start.

How they cheered Sir Mo Farah

warming up, in ominous, oppressive

heat. Mo the spirit

of the London Olympics over

a decade ago, when we celebrated

our country, the Queen descended

with James Bond from a helicopter,

the last time we felt good about ourselves.

The starting bell was rung by the Toon’s

Saudi-backed manager. It was Mo’s

final competitive race. He finished fourth.

Afterwards he said he didn’t know

what he would do next.  

 

But after his sunshine run and the Red Arrows

the sky darkened, thunder and lightening  

and rain. O, what rain. It flooded

South Shields Metro, chucking it down

on those brave stragglers still competing

and all those that had finished

and just wanted to go home. They queued

for the Shields ferry for hours, unprepared,

still in their running gear with only foil blankets

for protection, the weather unrelenting,

like a tempest at sea. They had tested

themselves, raised money for good causes.

Whatever has happened to this country

since 2012, however broken

we have become, none of those

sixty-thousand deserved this.

 

 

   

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◄ Unplaced at the Simonside Country Fair

Farewell, Sir Bobby ►

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R A Porter

Tue 10th Oct 2023 16:26

I loved this & having run/hobbled the GNR seven times for the MSTrust since 2007 (three times with my kids) it made me feel a little better about missing out this year. The roar of the red arrows over the Tyne Bridge is only rivalled for sensory timing and perfection by the smell of fish & chips sitting down to eat in the Coast to Coast Chippy in Kirkby Stephen en route home. Deserving of a sonnet …

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Telboy

Fri 15th Sep 2023 15:09

It's an easy target to take every opportunity to bash Britain, but we should acknowledge the great events we put on such as the GNR, and to remember we are one of the greatest countries in the world. That's why people risk their lives to come here.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th Sep 2023 08:52

Thanks for your comments, Graham and Stephen. Whenever I go for an outing in my adopted land these days, I feel I have to write a poem about it. There was nothing dour about the race itself, Graham, I can assure you. But the contrast with its aftermath was something you just had to write a poem about. We were near the Start and left early, so escaped the deluge. Our son, who took part, was not so fortunate.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 13th Sep 2023 12:27

I had a couple of mates who were there, Greg. They said it was biblical! Their Greg's sausage rolls got soggy & everything!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 13th Sep 2023 10:19

the GNR has always struck me as a bit of a dour event and some of your descriptions remind me of this.
I'm not sure just how broken Britain is when compared to some other countries and of course 2012 was a stellar year being Olympics et al.
Strangely enough I have been giving a lot of thought to 'charity fundraisers' recently and what a peculiar phenomenon it has become.
As always Greg, I seem to be able to hear your words! Have you got your eye out for a whippet yet?

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Greg Freeman

Wed 13th Sep 2023 09:16

Thank you very much for your comments, Steve, and for the Likes, Nigel, Holden, and John. Commiserations, Steve, for your bad luck in 2000. I'm not sure how many of this year's runners would appreciate me loading such symbolism on to the event. But that's what poets do sometimes, isn't it?

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Sep 2023 07:17

I missed it this year, Greg, but in 2000 I was due on the starting line for my one crack at the Great North Run, only to have to pull out at the last moment because of illness. I felt at the time that I didn't deserve it, just as no one deserved what happened on Sunday.

You capture the tinge of sadness in the whole event (Sir Mo etc) and the contrast with the heady days of 2012 is very effective.

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