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How I Learned to Dislike Fishing - For Anything!

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I remember turtle fishing with my grandfather

when I was a kid. We went around the lake in his boat,

checking the huge and fearsome hooks he used.

 

He pulled one up with the bait gone, the hook bent almost straight.

Later on, that very hot, Midwest summer day, he couldn’t seem to understand

why my brother and I didn’t want to go swimming there.

 

I recall thinking it best to let my imagination keep me safe

from the horrible jaws that no doubt lurked there,

just underneath the deep blue surface of that awful lake.

 

I assumed the creature that deformed that barbed hook

might be diligently looking for the son of a bitch

who likely gave it a sore mouth for such a small treat!

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Michael Mcpeek

Thu 18th Apr 2024 17:17

It is my fault forging me and come back to me

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Mon 18th Sep 2023 09:02

This poem speaks insightfully about the nature of guilt-projection.

On a personal note, I hate fishing and I'm scared of the sea and I love everything about this poem. It's cheeky and fun, but very clever indeed. 🌷

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