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Who's that there? 

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Dullen eyes, 

thinned skin, 

salt 'n' pepper hair. 

Droopy jowls, 

saggy bags, 

who's that there? 

Sounds lost, 

blighted sight, 

thoughts frittered. 

Stiffened joints, 

unfaked aches, 

mind littered. 

Once young, 

agile, virile, 

now neglected. 

forgotten youth, 

decrepit exhibit

Mirror reflected.

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◄ The Crossing

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Russell Jacklin

Wed 11th Oct 2023 19:04

thank you for your comments

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Oct 2023 15:52

The agile interested mind is the engine that ensures an ongoing
lively existence when the years obtain the price exacted on the
rest! 👍

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 11th Oct 2023 13:44

This made me picture the character (it reminded me of my grandfather). Rich in description and imagery.
Thank you.

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