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YOU SMILED

Something for the ever-hopeful in romance.  

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Nearly never made it to that dance the other night

Nearly stayed at home again - alone and out of sight

So glad I went and found you there

And found again that I could care

This loser's heart was still so sore

From all the hurt it had before

REFRAIN

You looked at me and in your eyes

I saw a stare of wild surprise

Everything stood still and then

You smiled - and love began again.

 

Nearly never made it to your side the other night

Nearly lost the nerve to think that life could turn out right

So glad I did and took a chance

And found love waiting for a dance

When I saw you in that crowd

This heart began to beat out loud

REPEAT REFRAIN

 

Nearly never made it to that dance the other night

Nearly stayed at home again - alone and out of sight

So glad I went and found you there

And found a dream that I could share

When I took you by the hand

This heart was beating (alt. singing) with the band

REPEAT REFRAIN

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th Oct 2023 17:14

Hugh - thanks for taking the time to "like" this entry.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th Oct 2023 17:11

Hi Helene - many thanks for the appreciation - and delighted you
enjoyed the recording. I have some family living in Oakland,
a marriage involving the eldest son of my late sister's marriage
to a US WW2 vet. from Louisiana. I hope to be in touch again
with Pete Dymond shortly and will enquire about the "set up" for this recording. Watch this space! 😃

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Hélène

Mon 30th Oct 2023 12:55

This is a wonderful song! Kudos from an old gal in California (moi). If you feel like it MC, would be interested in recording details (eg Dymond on vocals, were the instruments (guitar, etc?) live in the studio or synthesized?) I know very little about music or recording thereof, but my adult son has recorded a bit at a studio here in Cali and I find it quite interesting. Thank you for sharing such a lovely lyrical song poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 29th Oct 2023 15:30

To TH/HM/SG/JC and RBK - many thanks for the "likes". They
make it worth the effort.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 27th Oct 2023 16:33

Thanks JC. My own test for my compositions in song is whether
the work bears repeated successive listenings by yours truly.
Using that "test", it remains a favourite of mine. Pete Dymond
did a grand job with the vocal and recording at his studio in
Bristol.

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Oct 2023 20:21

Lovely, MC. It adds a different dimension to the poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Oct 2023 19:17

JC -Success! Audio now uploaded. Perseverance paid off.
Thanks due to Pete Dymond for the recording.
MC

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John Coopey

Wed 25th Oct 2023 22:06

Bring on the melody and audio, MC.

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