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THE GALMPTON ROBIN - a re-post for November

Some years ago now, I took a walk one November Sunday afternoon from my Torbay   

residence to the village of Galmpton beside the River Dart.  There, among trees devoid

of leaves, a lone robin sang out in the autumn air.  At that moment it seemed that he

was singing just for me. NOTE.:The word "quay" is pronounced "kee" here in the UK.

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The robin sang his song to me

When I walked out by Galmpton Quay;

Alone, he sang at twilight's gleam

Beside the darkening Devon stream.

 

I am Life, his sweet song said,

An angel's voice above my head.

Exulting in his melody,

The robin sang his song for me.

 

The tiny song-bird touched my heart,

That day beside the dreaming Dart.

My spirit soared as I passed by

And joined the robin in the sky.

 

The robin red-breast will I seek

That sings his song by Galmpton Creek,

And sang his song of joy to me

When I walked out by Galmpton Quay.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 3rd Nov 2023 13:27

Keith - I have family close to St. Marychurch - and now stay at a
favourite small hotel on the Downs overlooking Lyme Bay when
I visit Torbay. You are right about the "special moment". By the
time I got back I had the poem in my mind and just had to
scribble it down. I am an admirer of Hardy's "The Darkling
Thrush" and that was certainly an inspiration.
JC - Thanks. The rhythm was intentional but I have no plans to
put this to a tune. If that ever happened, it would probab;ly be
a bit of folksy "Devon ooh-arr" style.
HM - thanks for the "like".

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John Coopey

Fri 3rd Nov 2023 10:42

Lovely poem, MC, with a nice meter. If your mate sings this I hope it’s not as every Geordie I’ve ever heard singing The Lampton Worm

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keith jeffries

Thu 2nd Nov 2023 22:15

An interesting poem which evidently captured a special moment in time. I once lived in St. Marychurch for three years and loved the countryside in that part of South Devon.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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