Autumnal Abscission
The whiff of death,
party’s over, this
technicolour decline
needs a makeover.
Leaves gone acrid,
red, white and
blue blossoms
turned rancid brown.
Red and yellow
spots emerging,
a bloated assemblage
is rotting down.
Unkempt and
maggoty,
extremities
have putrefied.
And desperate
deadheads cling on,
won’t give up
on calmer days
long gone by.
A winter cleanse,
and a new beginning,
can start a trust
in growth,
one more time.
or the previous more overtly politicised version:
The whiff of death,
this party’s over and your
technicolour decline
needs a takeover.
Zealots gone acrid,
true blues turning
rancid brown.
Red spots, empty seedheads,
your bloated majority
is rotting down.
This mulchy stink tells us,
green is fast turning black,
as you shrivel and zombify,
get on your way,
and don’t come back.
Fungal, seedy,
and atrophying.
Unkempt, maggoty,
and crumbling.
Desperate, degenerate,
and clinging.
Give us winter cleanse
and a new beginning.
John Gilbert Ellis
Mon 6th Nov 2023 10:45
Thank you Keith and Stephen for the kind comments.
Also thanks for the likes from Manish, John and K Lynn.
After various other comments, I've rewritten this to be less overtly political and balance this against the autumnal.
I'm conscious of the ongoing debate on here about being too party politically focused, so trying to be a bit more subtle!