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Cold Wind

A cold wind is blowing;

It makes its way in,

It seeps through the brick

And clings to the skin.

It pierces the heart

With icy disdain

And somehow compels you

To look up again.

 

And when you look up

What is it you see?

No castle, no garden,

No landscape, no tree;

Just untidy death

Of industrial scale.

Now all human life

Is a second-hand sale.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 11th Nov 2023 08:30

Thank you Graham, Keith and Manish. It's a sad fact that in so many parts of the world pointless death is permanently on display.

And my thanks to Frederick, Aisha, Pete, Steve, Clare and K Lynn for liking.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Fri 10th Nov 2023 03:35

Thought provoking and brilliant as always, Stephen. The revelation in the second stanza is brilliantly written which is a hard-hitting truth.

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keith jeffries

Thu 9th Nov 2023 18:34

Well said Stephen,
Thanks,
Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 9th Nov 2023 18:11

Brilliantly put Stephen! Cold wind, cold hearts, cold blood!

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