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Poetry at War

Poetry at War

 

During times of war and adversity,

there is a need for compassion in poetry.

As buildings crumble and distant guns rumble,

the poet wakes and in his melancholy does stumble.

The world has turned upside down in his sight,

which motivates him with pen and paper to write.

His mind and voice are harmonised to compose,

the horrors to which his eyes are exposed.

In wars past old poets spoke of futility,

the loss of life blown into eternity.

Wars of yesteryear and those of today,

are all the same in what they have to say.

The poet stands alone to observe and wonder,

what lies beyond the guns and their thunder.

People trapped, wounded and grief stricken,

whilst others are shell shocked and forever smitten.

The landscape of war is one of desolation,

from which families are torn apart in their isolation.

Lovers are left to mourn and widows dressed in black,

as those they once loved return home in a sack.

The poet struggles to find words to describe,

as those who lie dead do now with God abide.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 25th Nov 2023 16:50

Wise and devastating words, Keith. The last four lines are particularly effective. Poetry is an essential response to pointless war, but, as you say, it is sometimes a struggle to find any more words.

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keith jeffries

Sat 25th Nov 2023 14:37

Thank you to all who liked this poem and to Uilleam and Manish for their comments.
Uilleam, your comment matches my many thoughts as I was born in the immediate postwar period on the outskirts of Birmingham and remember well a city still in ruins, not to mention Coventry a few miles down the road. I clearly recall bombed buildings and rationing. I lived in a world of people who grieved their losses, a local scenery out of some nightmare and on the table the most frugal fare. As I watch events in Gaza my mind instantly goes back to those grey wartorn days. War is utterly futile as there are no victors.
Thank you again,
Keith

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 22nd Nov 2023 11:08

Thanks Keith.
I find it difficult to mentally deal with the horrors we see daily on our screens. I think of mum and dad, schoolchildren during WW2, of mum, the youngest of eight, and the deprivations they endured...for what?

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Manish Singh Rajput

Fri 10th Nov 2023 04:01

Brilliant stuff, Keith. War, it's impact, and the aftermath is finely written. I liked the last two lines as I feel that it isn't easy to write about the dead or the innocents.
Thank you.

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