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As the Cockroaches Flee

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As the cockroaches flee,

Do you feel like a god?

Or do you squirm in your skin,

And let primal urges win?

 

Benevolence, for a thing of ill repute

Malevolence, for a thing of beauty

Built from the carrion of creation

Built from the decay of a nation

 

As the cockroaches flee,

Do you feel like a God?

 

The power of creativity

Held in palms fiercely,

As the urge to create,

Brings forth destruction.

 

As the cockroaches flee,

Do you feel like a God?

 

The power, once spent

The power, irreversible

Makes one's soul repent

Another's tyrannical

 

As the cockroaches flee,

Do you feel like a God?

 

with eyes composed of stardust

And lives compelled by lust

Our Gods imbued with rust

Trivialised for eternity in the crust.

 

But when the cockroaches flee,

Do you still feel like a God?

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Feb 2024 22:16

An interesting poem. Its structure is appropriate but I confess to being somewhat bemused by its content. The title of the poem suggests that those who flee are better off elswhere. May I suggest that as a South African the cockroaches are those who abandoned all responsibility and guilt and were out to save their own bacon. I could very well be wrong in this assumption but some poems can be interpreted differently to what the poet intended.
A thought provoking poem or which I thank you,
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 26th Nov 2023 18:30

A thought-provoking premise. The sheer variety of life on Earth
can make us casual and often cruel towards some of it, perhaps
too quick to evaluate the planned purpose of an existence that
we may see as hazardous to our own in certain situations and/or
in numbers that can seem to pose a threat. The trick, I guess, is
not to "rush to judgement" in our ability to end any life form we
meet.

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