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Stamping Ground

Not much goes on around my way;

It’s probably the same near you:

The brutes of buildings, boarded shops,

Unyielding gloom, the angry street,

The young, with nothing else to do.

 

So when they said I should join up,

I thought to myself: ‘Well, why not?’

It seemed a chance to break away

Into a blast of a cleaner air.

Nobody said I would get shot.

 

So now I lie beneath the stars

And yearn for my old stamping ground.

Compared to this, it wasn’t bad:

You got used to the gruff routine,

And knew which pavement you would pound.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Dec 2023 21:44

Thank you, Tim, and I am so sorry for your tragic loss. Never speak ill of the soldier. That's fine with me.
And thanks to Graham, Manish, Nigel, Stephen and Hugh.

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Tim Higbee

Sun 17th Dec 2023 14:16

I missed getting drafted by one day and I never chose to go. I had friends who made it a life career and others who never returned. I will speak ill of war always but never of the solder. I respect their choice to serve. My brother couldn't make the transition back to a familiar but different life. He took his own life. Another unspoken casualty. Thank you for your words, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Dec 2023 08:53

Thank you, Carlton. Your point is well taken. My dad found serving in WW2 a unique expereince and, for many, the return to civilian life was difficult and disappointing.

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David RL Moore

Sun 17th Dec 2023 08:49

A well obsereved poem Stephen,

There is a flip-flip side to that. For all the desolate hovels I served in, lost friends in, got blown up in, cleaned up entrails in coming home to and transitioning to civilian life and its oft trivialities was much harder.

Being someones mortal enemy provides clarity and no expectation of favour.

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