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Nativity

How has the shrine of wisdom and manger

Become a nightmare of fear and danger?

Lives tossed aside, like unwanted presents,

Of factory workers and toiling peasants?

How has Christmas, day of celebration,

Been transformed into a desecration,

Where the rocket, mortar, the flag and fist

Are the only currencies which subsist,

And the welcome afforded to a guest

Is replaced by suspicion and arrest?

The warm glow and the pride of infant birth

Once served as an example to this Earth;

Now chill of winter penetrates the straw,

And the barrels of a gun serve as law.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Dec 2023 20:54

Thank you for your comment, Carlton. I think I will Bethlehem a wide berth for the moment. In fact, I never got further than East Jerusalem. But I can well believe what you say.

Thank you, Ray. I appreciate your comment. 'Aching for a resolution' sums it up, I think. I love the Christmas story, and I feel desperately sad that the Holy Land is now the setting for so much hate and anger.

Thank you, Uilleam. I understand your view, although I don't think religion (or at least its Earthly manifestation) can be absent from this conflict, given that the likes of Iran are providing so much of the funding. I want a two-state solution, where Israel's existence is fully recognised and where Palestinians can live in dignity.

Thank you, Frederick.

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David RL Moore

Fri 15th Dec 2023 15:34

The same scripture that provided the saviour provided the reaper, and what delight mankind has taken in it.

The magnificent enlightenment or the blinkered bliss, either way a child is born and a child dies.

Bethlehem these days is a confusion of righteous Pilgrims looking for a place to park their SUV's, you should go take a look. From there you can hear the gunshots, maybe even the distant thud of God's enablement.

Happy Christmas, a child is born.

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raypool

Fri 15th Dec 2023 14:03

A very thoughtful piece aching for a resolution, which of course can never arise due to the perverse nature of man in general and racism in particular which is at the root of much hatred and subversion.

Thanks for always being straight and truthful Stephen.....

Ray

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 15th Dec 2023 11:45

Thank you Stephen.
You clearly express sorrow here, sorrow, which surfaced in me yesterday, as I watched our little ones relate the tale of Jesus’ Nativity at school.

The 75 year long Nakba, and the genocide it has now become is not about religion. It’s about an abuse of power (fascism and apartheid) falsely exercised in this case, in the name of Judaism, a fact which horrifies and angers Jews across the world, and peoples of all and of no religious faith.

If religion were truly at the root of the killings, Jews, including those in the USA and the UK, would not be protesting against Israel’s treament of Palestinians, and against the imprisonment and abuse of Israeli conscientious objectors and of anti-zionist Jews.

The flippant dismissal of the sufferning of innocent humanity, of our fellow poets, artists and journalists and of other cultures as being “all about religion” displays contemptuous ignorance. 💔

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Dec 2023 08:37

Thank you, Manish, Greg and MC for your comments.

This is a poem about sorrow. How has it come to this? Acts of the most despicable violence are presented as justifiable by one side or the other. A warped moral universe of staggering proportions.
We need peacemakers and a two-state solution.

And thanks to K Lynn and Holden.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 14th Dec 2023 17:10

I find it most unsettling that oddly
Religion is the weapon of the ungodly! 😈

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Greg Freeman

Thu 14th Dec 2023 15:39

It's certainly not much of a Christmas this year, Steve, for all the marketing.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 14th Dec 2023 13:52

Another great provocative poem, Stephen. Your poems always leave an essence in my mind, which I later build-up on, through more reads and understanding. Sadly, the last four lines of the poem is the harsh truth and is heartbreaking.
Thank you.

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