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Clothesline

Alas! Poor, poor clothesline

No longer do you look sublime

Worn and withered past your prime

No longer used respectfully

Your job now done automatically

Withdrawn slightly from the cold

Forgotten pins are all you hold

Alas! Poor, poor clothesline

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◄ Grandpa Lamb

Chilling of the Heart ►

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Telboy

Thu 28th Dec 2023 17:41

Sounds like it will soon peg out!

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Dec 2023 16:39

One of the most heart-rending pieces I’ve seen on here.

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Hélène

Thu 28th Dec 2023 16:14

Love this sweet, memory-invoking poem, Tim! My mom (long deceased) used the clothesline exclusively for our family of 5 kids; in my mind's eye I remember all the details of hanging laundry as part of our chores-- the fresh damp smell of the clothes; the cloth bag containing the wooden clothes pins; the space-saving style of pinning each garment with part of the next garment; arms reaching up and down as we methodically moved along the line; oh run outside and gather the laundry because rain is coming! One of my sisters still uses a clothesline, although, unlike our mom, she has a dryer option installed.

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