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Falling Down in Your Eighties (for Paula)

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And it was in that moment,
after her fall, making sure
nothing but her pride was hurt,
that she understood that time
would always win. As it always had.

But her spirit was not defeated by this.
It was as if the fall had shaken her to her senses,
allowing her to finally accept the nature of things
on a journey that many never get to make.

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Tim Higbee

Sun 14th Jan 2024 19:44

Hard truths told in a humble tale.
Very nice.
Tim

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Jan 2024 21:46

A beautiful poem, Mike.

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