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my howling hollow

The air has blown a howling hollow
And left nothing inside
Such the power of your scream goodbye
Such the power of the tumbling ring
And the resentment in the eye
That leaves

The kitchen sink has swallowed
The howling hollow followed
Goodbye
So many married words
The I do’s of the confetti herds
Have gathered in the aisles
And arranged themselves
In top hat and tail
With hope the king
In pastry tiers and icing flails
The diamond bling
the whipping tales
Of a wedding dress
White
And veiled
And lacy veils say it all
Hiding eyes

You were never 100% pure

The semi covered face
the quickened scrawl
Of a thousand wedding invites

The church hall is empty now
The high rise plughole
A reality cow

The star machine
No longer milking

‘ TV Chat’ and ‘99p bella’ reflect
On the table top neglect
Of flicked through magazines
In a salon
As she sits in a lathered daydream
With the sun tan imprint
Still in-between her third finger

The band of gold
Has ceased to linger there

◄ footballers wives

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Francine

Sun 21st Jun 2009 15:16

Que tu sais créer des images dans ma tête ; )

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clarissa mckone

Fri 25th Apr 2008 01:35

HI Peter,
Yes I always feel the poems, that I write. I feel many that I read, that are the works of others.Most of my love and lost and pain poems I feel so intensly, that to re-read them, hurts, even if its been years.

Now lets see, Im just home from the hospital, so I hope Im reading this and typeing ok.
Many times I feel the poems not finnished, esp if its short, for some reason in my head its to be long, or its not good, or not enough has been said. yet it has all been said.It may be some perfectionistic type personality type.

Pete Crompton

Thu 24th Apr 2008 23:17

thank you Darren and Clarissa.
Darren I think your work has influenced me in, especially with the 'cardboard spaceships' and that kind of imagary.

I had been stuck in a place for a while, and stubborn me not reading enough needed to just (if just for a while) open and drift.

I always feel the poems partially written
do you find that with your work?
Clarissa / Darren

darren thomas

Wed 23rd Apr 2008 00:03

Good - I like this one too. Is it me or is Mr Crompton sailing through his mellow period? Great observations Pete, and nice to see a shift in style.

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clarissa mckone

Sun 20th Apr 2008 04:50

HI Peter,
This is a very nice poem. take care

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