The Echoes poetry competition to celebrate Write Out Loud's 20th anniversary is now open.  Judged by Neil Astley.

Competition closes in 8 days, 2 hours. Get details and Enter.

Call it Dreamin'

I knew from the very beginning
that the sun would rise,
teaching me to cast my eyes to heaven.
Cloudy days are like sacrifices:
to compensate we had the green
and water worlds, tall trees and dappled sunlight.
Some would like the world to be clean again,
a pre-lapsarian garden of Eden. I would.

…….

I knew from the very beginning that my heart was tender
easily broken. I learnt there is no balm for the earth’s hurt,
there is no point fooling around, pretending, time is short,
wounds sometimes heal if we seek redemption and pray.

…….

I knew from the very beginning
that I couldn’t live with eyes closed,
mind and senses anaesthetised,
permanently marooned on the barren island of self
to develop a dryness of manner, an arrogance of soul,
alienating those who endure closed lives of repetition.

……..

Simple used to be a high compliment, as holy fools attest,
denying the astringent vortex of doubt and casuistry,
we walk in shade and sun, lay out a platter of dreams,
walk, stumble, run, towards these dreams.
Now I am so tired from all this walking and thinking
that I miss the dawn, live too much at night,
seek a cure in dreams, spells and incantations; 
it is high time to give many gifts of time and love 
beneath our holy brother sun.

 

?si=ex9w5C-HPYZy8B4a
🌷(4)

◄ The sea shell said

RESISTANCE ►

Comments

Profile image

John Marks

Wed 31st Jan 2024 15:00

Thank you kindly Hugh, Uilleam, New Shoes, Holden and Tim.

"He who knows most grieves most for wasted time."

Dante Alighieri

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 31st Jan 2024 09:46

Thanks John,

"permanently marooned on the barren island of self"...indeed!

Profile image

New Shoes

Wed 31st Jan 2024 05:06

Very good John!

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message