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All words become me

All words become me
They reflect what I feel
Sometimes I want to hide from them
and stem the tide of words
but outside my window the storm of words is brewing
and I am stewing inside.
outside the wind of words is breaking against my wall
outside phrases are hammering like rain against my window
eventually they will breakthrough the window and like lightening
they will flash out of my mouth.

◄ walking talking contradiction

The anarchist in all of us ►

Comments

darren thomas

Wed 23rd Apr 2008 00:07

Hi Daniel - i read your stuff and enjoy it.

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Daniel Hooks

Mon 21st Apr 2008 10:39

Thankyou very much Zuzanna!

<Deleted User> (4281)

Sun 20th Apr 2008 22:57

Hello, Daniel

You have great use of metamorphosis in this poem. Very nice and well expressed. It gives the reader feeling of bursting from those words that are trying to come out of your imaginative mind.

Great write - Thank you!
Zuzanna

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