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A foreign wood

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The empire called for more men, and they came.

Shipped from sub-continent

to western front,

Gallipoli, Mesopotamia, East Africa, 

largest volunteer army in the world.

 

They weren’t ready for the cold;

couldn’t understand new officers

when theirs were slain. 

Some wounded, shipped to England,

died and were buried

in a corner of a foreign wood

with Muslim honours, near a mosque,

among the sentry birch and pines.

 

Undisturbed for decades, then came vandals.

The soldiers were exhumed;

monument, arches, minarets,

domed gateway remain.

 

Remember them, and their memorial,

when leaves cling on in November wind,

magpies and crows call through the trees.

It’s time to dig again

the mossy turf and sandy soil;

to bury war, unearth peace.

 

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John Coopey

Mon 11th Mar 2024 23:42

When I worked at Selby Abbey I witnessed a number of Memorial Services there. It is a matter of some pride to me that besides the poppies for sale there were also badges and symbols commemorating the sacrifice of Christians, Muslims, Jews, Hindus and Sikhs.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 11th Mar 2024 23:06

Thanks for the comments and likes. I re-posted this because when the old Muslim war cemetery in Woking was restored as an Islamic peace garden it seemed such an uncontroversial thing. It happened in 2015, just one year before everything changed in our country https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ffogn5w2dQM

leon stolgard

Mon 11th Mar 2024 15:16

yep-' what passing bells for these who die as cattle ' and
there are still plenty more of those ' cattle ' where they came from unfortunately-👍 Greg

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 11th Mar 2024 13:41

The time and place of this announcement by Hunt is nothing less
than political opportunism in response to the Galloway/Muslim vote result in Rochdale. If it had been included quietly in some
other context it might have obtained a less contentious response.
A million pounds on this "gesture" at this particular time is
hardly likely to endear the Tories to those struggling financially
across the country. How many of the many mosques built
across the land have already received tax payers' money?
I think we should be told. But I won't be looking to the
Guardian to cover that aspect of public expenditure.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Mar 2024 06:54

Humanity runs through the veins of this poem, Greg. A fine tribute to brave people. It's sad that even morons of the far right can get worked up about such an obviously decent project.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 10th Mar 2024 22:19

Wonderful last five lines Greg.
Food for thought!

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Telboy

Sun 10th Mar 2024 20:58

On the off chance of me fighting and dying for my country (not so remote perhaps in the current climate) I will happily agree to some of my taxes being used for a memorial to 'citizens brought up as Christian but who gradually became complete non-believers'.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 10th Mar 2024 20:11

Re-posted in response to this news story. https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2024/mar/10/tory-mps-criticise-plans-for-memorial-to-muslim-soldiers-who-died-in-world-wars

They were very woke in Surrey, even back then. It was restored a few years ago as a 'peace garden' by the Horsell Common Preservation Society, a notorious extremist group of the kind that Michael Gove may well be seeking to proscribe.

Included in 'The Fall of Singapore' collection (Dempsey & Windle, 2022)

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