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Fulfillment

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I am aware that

We both aren’t

Perfect.

You are horizontal,

And I am vertical.

 

But we’d work out well

Together,  

Together,

We’d make a plus.

 

And thus,

I believe in us.

 

I truly do,

I forever will.

 

Tonight seems still

Like every other night,

Heavy on darkness

And low on light,

Everything seems nil,

As I wait for my wish

To be fulfilled.  

 

🌷(8)

◄ Desire

Waiting for the Sun ►

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Manish Singh Rajput

Fri 15th Mar 2024 04:41

Thanks a lot Tim, Stephen G and Holden for your generous comment. It means a lot to me.😇

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 14th Mar 2024 20:50

A wonderful poem, Manish, I loved the last stanza! 😊🌷

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 14th Mar 2024 13:46

Well done, Manish. Deceptively simple but full of meaning in its concise construction.

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Tim Higbee

Thu 14th Mar 2024 12:35

The heart is about simple truths while the mind's complexity makes us wonder and wish.
I like the transition from stated assuredness to a hope for fulfillment. Nicely done.

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