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In memoriam...

With an eye to eternity

and an 'in memoriam' murmur

from the caverns of posterity,

it's all sotto voce prophecies

in some sub rosa haze,

too late to be wrangled 

out of conjecture

right at the juncture

of hope and fear, 

where sophistry comes cheap

and distant requiems plead:

why did you care

for every wrong thing?

◄ Silhouette.

Mulberry. ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Wed 17th Apr 2024 19:16

Thank you so much, John, for your thoughtful comment, and attention to detail! 😊

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John Marks

Wed 17th Apr 2024 03:19

I love 'wrangled' so much more deliberation than 'tangled' would have been.

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Auracle

Thu 28th Mar 2024 22:20

Thank you Holden Moncrieff. I do appreciate you this very much.

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 25th Mar 2024 18:19

Thank you, Auracle, all reactions are acceptable😉

Thank you, Stephen, I think you're absolutely right about the particular juncture! 😎

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 25th Mar 2024 08:09

Thank you, Holden. I imagine that many things will come cheap at this particular juncture, or maybe I'm wrong. Good poem.

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Auracle

Sun 24th Mar 2024 23:40

makes me laugh. ignorance I suppose 😀

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