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Mulberry.

Blood colours the fruits,

Thisbe weeps for Pyramus;

A mulberry dirge...

◄ In memoriam...

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 03:42

Thank you, David, I appreciate the comment! 😎

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David RL Moore

Tue 2nd Apr 2024 11:09

Could even be a "trifle" I suppose, with a little added sponge.

A great story, so engaging in metaphor that even Shakespeare stole it.

An interesting idea Holden.

David

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 1st Apr 2024 17:29

Thank you so much, Manish, for your continuous kindness and encouragement! 😊

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 1st Apr 2024 16:38

This is brilliant, Holden. It made me visualize the whole scene through just three lines. Excellent!

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