moment.
The patrimony of a moment
In Time suspended:
To be caught unawares
In some ruthless hourglass,
Scavenging for mercy
But only finding sand...
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Yes, this one works for me. It trips off my tongue.
Wed 10th Apr 2024 20:27
Thank you so much, Russell, for your thoughtful comment, I really appreciate it! 😊
There's a visual here that is both terrifying and poignant of how we are trapped by time as it moves relentlessly on.
brilliant sir
Tue 9th Apr 2024 21:51
Thank you so much, Graham and Stephen, I'm very grateful for your comments! 😊
A terrifying image, Holden. A fine and unnvering poem.
Sometimes I wonder why we created time! It seems to be elastic.
A satisfying moment of poetry Holden.
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Holden Moncrieff
Mon 3rd Jun 2024 01:42
Thank you very much, Martin, your kind comment means a lot! 😊