Hury Patience!
The details of you have blurred
over the years since you've been gone,
but how I miss you still has sharp edges
that cut the ribbons of my memories,
laying them bare and exposed
against all of this night of your absence.
I’ll keep trying to patch the ribbons together
into something beautiful so I can remember you
only as daylight, and the jagged loss hopefully,
with patience, no longer cuts when I visit you.
<Deleted User> (35860)
Wed 3rd Apr 2024 01:15
' remember you, only as daylight '
just one brilliant line of so many.
Absolutely lovely poem Mike, thank you.
Beth