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Villanelle

This form has got a fearsome reputation;

I don’t know why, it seems ok to me.

I guess it’s ‘cause there’s lots of repetition.

 

Come now and let’s review my definition;

five tercets and a quatrain, I agree

this form has got a fearsome reputation.

 

I thought it was a simple composition,

but straight away the problem’s there to see;

I guess it’s ‘cause there’s lots of repetition.

 

With just two rhymes to write in this tradition,

you’ll find it hard to have it flowing free;

this form has got a fearsome reputation.

 

Consumed with your desire for recognition,

you’ll have a go, but there’s no guarantee;

I guess it’s ‘cause there’s lots of repetition.

 

It’s just as well a writer’s disposition

will spur him on despite his muse’s plea.

I guess it’s ‘cause there’s lots of repetition;

this form has got a fearsome reputation.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 06:58

It's good to see a poet writing about the difficulty of composing a villanelle, Trevor, and then demonstrating that he has mastered it so comfortably. Well done!
I'm trying to write one about Donald Trump at the moment, but that's another story.....

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John Coopey

Sat 6th Apr 2024 13:04

Nice work, Trevor. I’ve written the odd villanelle but I confess to finding them aurally unsatisfying. It always seems to me that the middle line never gets resolved. I think I’ll write one about that!

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Greg Freeman

Sat 6th Apr 2024 08:08

Well done, Trevor! Glad you were spurred on to examine the form.

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Trevor Alexander

Sat 6th Apr 2024 00:08

An old villanelle I recently edited a bit...

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