FINISHED ink pad began in July last year! Here's final thing today.
Six Month Evaluation
Do you you think you have scared them off
It certainly scared those ones in charge
Of hiring for proprietors a privilege
In just being asked
What chance the grubby homeward constantly
Interview selected
How can it prove the visible room
Circles in repetition cycle
Already thinking Movie channel
Did you get the part of knocked onto arse
By standing up because more importance
Questions or statements kept in balancing
More than act what more could ever been
Here do you think they understand all
Even though written in languages
Not personally invented but enough adjustment
Signal improve and not even turned dial
If there is an influence
Always thought it was rejecting this
In their search for authenticness
When always shouted at the crowds
So in the future always fun
If they haven't all been scared crying
Always fall back of just thinking of self
Trying a filling up of a blank page
Just for the purpose of writing on
To last empty gap between lines
And what have we got
For a final word?
Nothing
That hasn't been jotted
In those days
And nights
Of my own
Before
Stops at the last page.
Martin Elder
Thu 30th May 2024 10:18
Love the rhythm and pace of this as well as the words. Nice one