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Is there anything more precious in life than a woman who is kind,

Who endures its slings and arrows, but seldom seems to mind.

Adorned by Nature's passing years to become a Sheba-wise sage,

Well able to handle the opposite sex from infancy to old age.

So, my lads, whoever you may be, pray to your god that you find

The pleasure of the treasure that caring designed - a woman who is kind.

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◄ BEACHHEAD - JUNE 6, 1944

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Ghazala lari

Mon 10th Jun 2024 04:12

I completely agree with you.

There is a natural division of labor between men and women, not based on outdated stereotypes, but on inherent strengths and qualities.

While kindness, caring, and nurturing are often associated with women, these are essential qualities for men as well, particularly within their families and extending outwards to the world.

The modern lifestyle, however, has placed an immense burden on women, expecting them to juggle successful careers with maintaining home and family responsibilities. This relentless pressure has had a devastating impact on women's health, both physically and emotionally.

Women, while capable and strong, are often physically more delicate and susceptible to the strain of such demanding roles.

It's time to recognize and respect the inherent differences between men and women, allowing them to flourish in their natural roles.

By embracing a more balanced approach, where men and women contribute their unique strengths, we can create a more peaceful and harmonious society, both within families and the world at large, reminiscent of a time when these roles were understood and respected.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 8th Jun 2024 17:36

My poem was indeed an observation on the important role that
women play in any society at ease with itself. It is perhaps also
a passing reminder to women not to lose sight of their timeless relevance in the attitude of men towards them throughout life.
There is a risk that the vital nurturing nature can be reduced in
importance, not least in the current attitudes that can be
witnessed in modern life as more emphasis is placed upon
material worth. In my own long life, I have wondered whether
women do not always appreciate the vital influence they wield
over the opposite sex...from birth through upbringing to their
eventual departure into wider adult society. It is a subject
worthy of the closest study.

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Ghazala lari

Sat 8th Jun 2024 13:42

This poem is written in rhyming couplets.
The language is somewhat archaic, with words like "slings and arrows" and "Sheba-wise sage," which adds to the sentimental and nostalgic feel of the piece.
You seem to be addressing all men in general, urging them to seek out a woman who is kind and caring.

This poem extols the virtues of a kind woman and encourages men to find one, as she is rare and precious.
"Are you trying to advocate for a more traditional view of gender roles, where the woman is seen as the nurturer and caretaker in the relationship"?

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