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A Considerate Bartender

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Displaying the art

Of dips and mixtures

Behind the brown,

Blending counter,

Wondering what’s

In-stored for me

To encounter?

 

The day is new,

With a few new faces;

Some seem secretive,

While some lay

Approachable traces,

Some indulged in

Small-talk dates,

And some drowned

Quickly into lust-chases.

 

A pair of eyes peered

Outside the window,

Albeit having many

Consumable insides,

And I know that

He who fails to

Share what’s in mind,

Decides to hide;

His mind’s weather

Seems hard to gauge,

I hope he finds

Someone to talk to

And engage.

 

This place is

Religious to me,

Heartbroken or happy,

People present here

Are the ones who

Made it out alive.

 

Within my portion

Are some potions,

Of which I mix

A little bit of bliss

And a little bit of bam,

To appreciate your

Small victories

With slow claps.

 

If you’ve got

A redemption due,

I’m here to serve you,

Perhaps to lure

All your senses

Into the vastness

Of confidence.

 

In this happy hour,

I see renewed faces

Preferring whiskey neat,

And chugging bears,

Producing a smile so sweet,

And echoing cheers.

 

Some are trying to

Get back on their feet,

And I precisely know

What they need.

And to the ones

Who are unhappy,

And too lost to

Figure out where to be,

The rest of the rounds

Are on me.

 

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◄ Very Much Alive

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Tim Higbee

Mon 10th Jun 2024 17:44

The last stanza is a glorious culmination of the poem. The bartender who listens to what you want but understands what you need.
Great job my friend!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 10th Jun 2024 09:25

Thank you very much, Keith, and to all who liked this. It means a lot to me.😊

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keith jeffries

Sat 8th Jun 2024 19:34

Manish,
A poem skillfully written with a very appropriate ending. Thanks.
Keith

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