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Massacre

I looked out the window

At the early morning light

That unusually laid low,

My routine walk didn’t

Feel the same,

There weren’t any

Red-whiskered bulbuls

Calling out my name,

The wind was perhaps

At a different place,

Uphill windmills kept

Mum about its trace.

 

There was silence

And stillness around,

Except for some heavy

Machinery sound,

The teaks were still

And so were the neem,

Their silence seemed

Like silent screams.

 

I trudged down the hill,

And at a gruesome curve,

My heartbeat almost

Dropped to nil;

The brawny sandalwoods

Weren’t the same as

They previously stood,

They were the heart

Of the woods.

 

One amongst the

Dead and dying spoke to me,

Furiously and painfully,

‘Where’s the other

Half of me?

Why don’t you just

Let us be?’

 

◄ A Wish

Known Eyes ►

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 25th Jun 2024 04:45

Thanks a ton, Graham, Tim and Stephen for your most generous comments, they mean a lot to me. Cheers!😊
And thanks to all those who liked this.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 24th Jun 2024 09:39

Remarkable poem, Manish. It sent a chill through me.

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Tim Higbee

Mon 24th Jun 2024 00:31

Well done again my friend. The sense of something ominous in the air, a change has taken place.
‘Where’s the other Half of me?
Why don’t you just Let us be?’
The personification in those two lines is powerful.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 21st Jun 2024 15:33

The teaks were still
And so were the neem,
Their silence seemed
Like silent screams.

So effective!

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