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Suspended.

Disbelief suspended, 

Mischief invented:

The dominion of dreams

Aflicker with potential,

Afloat with the tangential,

Where daredevils set sail,

Hypnotic courage ablaze,

Hurtling, untethered, towards

The lands of Maybe, or Never...

◄ Unearned.

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 28th Jun 2024 22:16

Thank you so much, Stephen, for your thoughtful comment! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th Jun 2024 11:14

The last line seems to suggest that life, like politics, is the art of the possible. Interesting poem, Holden.

Holden Moncrieff

Fri 28th Jun 2024 01:01

Thank you, Keith, for your comment, I appreciate it!

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keith jeffries

Thu 27th Jun 2024 20:59

I must agree with MC. This poem speaks of excuses and never the conclusive.
Thanks,
Keith

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 27th Jun 2024 17:20

Thank you very much, M.C., for your comment, I find the connection you drew fascinating! 😎

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 27th Jun 2024 16:32

Reminds me of my situation at the hands of successive medicos who are arch-exponents of the terms "might be", "could be"
and "may be". 😏

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