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Isn't Always Cute

They say love begins

With a long, soul-soothing,

Confessional walk

That ends at a dock

Facing a beautiful sunset,

Where a luring tune of a flute

Promises that love is cute.

 

Lucky are ‘they’ who say so,

But if their lines fail,

And efforts go in vain,

Would they lay low?

 

I’ve heard to their sanctimonious talks,

I’ve also been on such walks

And I don’t mean to mock,

But I haven’t seen or heard

To what’s been romantically told;

Loving someone has

Only left me cold.

 

At the dock, I’ve sat alone,

And only heard to puny tune

Of a rusted old flute

That told me how

Love isn’t always cute.

 

It seems heavenly and sound,

Until one of them wants to

Retouch the ground;

It feels as though

The world has grown bereft

Of love and commitment,

Often a togetherness promise

Emits a betrayal scent.   

 

Love isn’t always around,

Or tangibly close,

Its sometimes far,

Like a distant star,

The idea of it coming near

Would only arouse great fear;

Fear of facing another loss,

Or feelings being tossed.

 

I sit at the edge of the dock,

Staring at the night sky,

It’s ineffable how some

Still want to give it a try,

When a faraway lightning

Warns about love having

Apocalyptic attributes,

Maybe they’re okay with

Being destroyed that way,

I live today to watch that another day.

 

And from beneath the creaky wood,

I hear to a puny tune

Of a rusted old flute

That tells me how

Love isn’t always cute.

 

◄ Nobody Knows

Dream-Mine ►

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 20th Jul 2024 17:24

Thank you very much for your most generous comment, Clare. It means a lot to me!😇

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Clare

Sat 20th Jul 2024 11:44

It’s been a while since I logged in here and I am so glad I did. It would be an enormous shame had I missed such a stunning poem!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 16th Jul 2024 18:21

Thank you very much, Tim. It means a lot to me.😇
And thanks to all those who liked this.

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Tim Higbee

Tue 16th Jul 2024 14:48

Love isn't always cute, and millions would agree. Love has many faces and some of them are cruel and ugly.
Very clear and intentional wording to demonstrate the desired intent. Well done, my friend.

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