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Three Strings Detached

There are three strings missing

On my violin,

I think of touching the last one,

But it’s very delicate and thin,

Outside the dusty window

And closed-compact walls,

Is a road that goes far

And stands tall.

 

Down that easy road,

Bearing risks of a rough patch,

Some blind-trustingly go aboard,

While some get weighed down

By the fear of detach.

 

There are extraordinary apps and

Websites that claim to have made

Their heavenly perfect match,

But there is a catch,

For I know that there are

Hardly any genuine profiles,

Desperate individuals and their insincerity

Can be sensed from miles,

Their make-believe ambitions and aims,

Or sometimes even their fake names.

 

The naïve ones can’t help

Their stupid heart from taking a fall,

And the ones with second-thoughts

Wisely withdraw and uninstall,

But once one takes a deep dive,

There are no wise or naïve,

It either works out great,

Or leaves you stranded

To self-berate.

 

I watch them all from behind

A closed and dusty window,

Caved-in by the walls of fear;

To save my heart is the

Only intention here,

For there’s only a little love

Left beneath my weak skin,

And three missing strings

On my violin.

 

dating apps

◄ Dream-Mine

Nothingness ►

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Auracle

Sat 3rd Aug 2024 15:53

Thank you. And you can call me Kevin. If I come crashing down, then let it be more than a Waterfall. And Earth will feast on me untill there is no more.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 1st Aug 2024 08:08

Thank you very much for the read and appreciation, Auracle. It means a lot to me!😇

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Auracle

Wed 31st Jul 2024 18:38

I had to read it several times, on different days. Just now it hit me:

You touched a string there!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 27th Jul 2024 17:14

Thank you very much, Tim, Tom and Oscar for your most generous and overwhelming comments, it means a lot to me.
Somehow, music has often made a place in my poems and I'm glad that you all liked it.
And thanks to, Hugh, Stephen G, Holden, Endigo, Steve, Larisa and Lynn for the likes.😊

Oscar Fadlala

Fri 26th Jul 2024 17:02

magnificent work, Manish. I got the feeling that the last string is somehow holding your sanity. but people dont know that music can also be played just with one string. This is ART, keep writing please.

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Tom Doolan

Fri 26th Jul 2024 16:55

Good work Manish 👍

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Tim Higbee

Fri 26th Jul 2024 15:07

I love the violin with the three missing strings. It adds depth and texture to the emotions of looking through the apps. The sense of risk and the comparison between the fear of destroying the fragile last string and the fear of destroying the last of your fragile heart. Tremendous poem my friend. I enjoyed it.

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