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From Iberia to the Breadbasket (the brackets of battles)

 

Kransky took one in the head

his smile blown from his face,

the olive grove now green and red

Hail, Mary, full of grace.

 

The Warrior Poets pitch their pens

from Gijon, west to Alcazar,

convictions morphed from remember when's

"El Corazon's" know who they are

 

The heart and head are in the fight

torn between what gives them life,

The darkness of the coming night

a dagger or a surgeon’s knife?

 

From here, the edge of looming war

we trudge the path that stretches back,

uncertain what it led here for

or how we judge its aftermath.

 

O'Malley caught a flying drone

his torso split in two,

the wheat fields fertilized with bone

God, forgive, the things we do. 

 

Video and audio available at link below

https://wolfgarwords.com/2024/08/01/from-iberia-to-the-breadbasket-the-brackets-of-battles/

 

 

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David RL Moore

Sat 3rd Aug 2024 08:34

Thank you Ray,

It's difficult to capture the futility of war in short works. You can either write in a remote way or get personal..I'd like to be able to sustain a longer piece but am conscious that it has to be unrelentingly focussed to maintain the readers attention, I don't think I'm endowed with such ability.

I'm fascinated by the arc of history, specifically from the Spanish Civil War onward.

Thanks so much for your reading and comments.

David

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raypool

Fri 2nd Aug 2024 20:19

The form of rhyme suits this hard hitting quality war poem giving it an almost lyrical grotesque tone David.

Ray

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David RL Moore

Thu 1st Aug 2024 15:56

Thank you for the early likes.

David.

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