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PENNY WISE

The power of the penny is much diminished

its future in finance pretty well finished

one stares at me from a bunch of change

with its good eye looking up

as it to say I promise to pay

when the idea brings a smile of pity

like a refugee from a beggar's cup. 

 

It's name perhaps will guarantee

a place in fiscal eternity

as an epitaph for a toilet's access

serving the lady as well as the gent

in a dim and distant urgency,

even the pound is considered unsound

transmuted from paper, too easily spent. 

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raypool

Sun 18th Aug 2024 21:00

Thanks for looking in and liking Tom, Hugh, Aisha, Larisa and John.

Spread the word Graham - it can't just fade away you're right, and of course all the girls that are called Penny (short admittedly for Penelope!) Concise reasoning too.

Thanks Stephen for pointing out your liking those lines!

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 15th Aug 2024 13:50

A lovely concluding couplet, Ray.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 14th Aug 2024 21:21

Penny Arrow toffee, Penny Lane, Penny for your thoughts! I'm sure it will endure Ray! The p had never eclipsed the d.

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