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A Fault In The Architecture

 

I sat in the cafe as I had when a boy.

Sitting as if I'd see the world as I did back then,

When the steam from my tea cup 

snatched a rainbow from the window light

It seemed the world was full of colour 

But, now the cafe was derelict, charcoaled.

The window lay in shards & fragments 

The colours of the rainbow, repelling 

There was rot in the architecture 

of both stone & flesh

Generations of skin tones bleeding the same red

Lessons seeping into fissures of time & ignorance. 

Many thistles had grown while I sat

Creeping from blood hewn gullies 

Fire & brimstone is eternal it would seem

I tried to leave, but remembered I'd died long ago

Perhaps, humanity had too, without even realising 

I hoped not

I hoped somewhere there was still love.

My black skin had turned white

Perhaps now, I thought, I'll get some peace

Though I wasn't sure it mattered anymore 

In the end, we're all  just animals

Alpha & omega 

Biting our own hands

Until we can feed ourselves no more.

🌷(8)

Warriots

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 18th Aug 2024 22:42

Thank you, Stephen. Quite a depressing write, but the world seems broken at the minute. Let's hope things change for the better, sooner rather than later!
And thanks for the Likes Tom, Hugh, Aisha & Holden, always appreciated

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 18th Aug 2024 08:29

A very tough, profound poem, Stephen. So well written.

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