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Masterpiece.

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Masterpiece. 

He painted me just like all those masterpieces that had gone before

His brush, a wand, sprinkling lovers in the mist

 

The artist brought his muse to life

In a water coloured wish

In his world, I became Venus

I became The Kiss

 

He saw me as a butterfly

In a kaleidoscope of colour

I was a mermaid

Rising gracefully

From the overburdened sea

 

From his mind, I emerged

A flower

Fresh from the mountain dew

He saw me as a woman

Who understood his subtle hues

 

He painted me to see him

And see him, I do

I see him as the artist

Whom I once dreamt I knew.

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Tim Higbee

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:57

There is a true eloquence to how you create your imagery with words. Very nice, Clare.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 12:33

Masterpiece indeed! With some beautiful phrases like the "water coloured wish"

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Clare

Thu 12th Sep 2024 23:00

🤗. Thanks Stephen! I am wondering why a talent such as yourself hasn’t joined my poetry group yet. ☺️

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Sep 2024 22:52

How to paint with words. Lovely stuff, Clare

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