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Synesthesia

 

His fists to her were love,
bouquet’d bruises in velvet glove.
Her tears like salted diamonds fell
shaped from pain she’d never tell...

 

her children, not of hope but fear
their ransom all that held her here,
though if she ever could she would
renege her tortured motherhood.

 

She pictured home as was before
unbent, unbroke behind her door.
The hurt, she fashioned into care

that none but her should have to bear.

 

 

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David RL Moore

Thu 26th Sep 2024 10:24

Thanks to Tom, Stephen, Holden and Reggie for the likes.

David RL Moore

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David RL Moore

Wed 25th Sep 2024 13:35

Thank you Ray and Uilleam and to Aisha for the like.

Written some time ago now but not posted here. Tweaked a little, and here it is.

David RL Moore

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 25th Sep 2024 12:05

An all too familiar story, David.
Yes Ray, a way of life indeed...about which a friend has recently confided in me in "matter of fact" terms...a story made all the more harrowing through the sheer mundanity of its narration.

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raypool

Wed 25th Sep 2024 10:52

What appeals to me here is the almost nursery rhyme style that packs such a punch and says things we dare not even think as a way of life that applies to a vast swathe of couples in domestic environments where most abuse of individual rights is acted out.

How much bitterness can we swallow, I ask.....

Ray

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