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Waiting...

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I often think about her

turning away and pointing

she points (always)

from a winning stance

she says

that she thinks about me

or so she says...

I think of her push

and shove laugh

and her fingered arguments-

I was wrong

she was (always) often correct

and as we crawled into

each other's wet laugh...

we waited...

and she waited longer.

 

 

words and foto Tommy carroll

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 29th Oct 2024 09:27

Love this piece Tommy.
‘I think of her push and shove laugh’
and
‘Crawled into each others wet laugh’

Brilliant!, G

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