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How Did It Get So Late So Soon? [song version]

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How Did It Get So Late So Soon?

 

The man who scared the ghosts away,

The woman who healed wounds with a kiss,

I think of them more nowadays

In sad and troubled times like this.

No longer there to hug the pain

From tired bones and broken hearts,

To shield you from the winter rain

That permeates where old age starts.

 

Another day of fleeting tasks

From rising sun to waning moon

The stranger in the mirror asks

How did it get so late so soon

 

The back garden is over-grown,

The kitchen is a darker place,

These memories are hard to own.

the mirror is so hard to face -

where glimpses of them both reside

and haunt you as you reach the day

that saw the turning of the tide

and saw their brightness slip away.

 

Another day of fleeting tasks

From rising sun to waning moon

The stranger in the mirror asks

          How did it get so late so soon

 

We try to catch the falling star

We try to stop  the ticking clock

but in the end it’s all we are -

a sliver chipped from the old block.

The man who scared the ghosts away

The woman who healed wounds with a kiss

They knew each dog must have its day.

No longer there to tell you this.

 

Another day of fleeting tasks

From rising sun to waning moon

The stranger in the mirror asks

          How did it get so late so soon

Another day of fleeting tasks

From rising sun to waning moon

The stranger in the mirror asks

          How did it get so late so soon

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:54

thanks to everyone for the likes and encouraging comments.

Not any easy song to sing live - a lot of emotion to hold in and deliver it without a waver in my voice.

I'm glad you liked it - just wish my parents had been able to hear it 😞

Thanks again

Ian

TOM MERTON

Wed 6th Nov 2024 09:46

Seen the film, read the book, worn the T-shirt-now at seventy eight, I'm wondering when ' they'll come to 'bin bag' and barbeque me and/or the missus-😃 (El cheapo quick cremation deal-and no relatives crocodile tears haha )

Wonder if the men in black will give us a discount if we pop on the same day-well, it would save on bin bags and give the grandkids more dosh for posher mobiles and vapes 😆

Great poem Ian!

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John Coopey

Tue 5th Nov 2024 20:19

Wonderful, Ian. A poignant and timeless picture of their and our mortality.

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Tom

Tue 5th Nov 2024 16:05

Beautiful, Ian!

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 5th Nov 2024 14:46

I do not subscribe to seeing ghosts but I often see my late father looking back at me in the bathroom mirror!
Lovely piece Ian.

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