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War in Season

 

Ice puddles like lily pads

an archipelago of creeping freeze,

stepping stones of tears perhaps

shed by autumns grieving trees...

 

then captured in the frozen glare

of sunlight’s first defiant rays,

they'll fade as if were never there

to herald in such hopeful days.

 

So many things unseen by men

the simple and the subtle change,

that slip through time like ink through pen

rewritten on an unturned page...

 

like bridges built between the wars

that yield to fear and promised gain,

all reaching out, their hope ignored

when war in season comes again.

 

Audio & Video available at links below

https://wolfgarwords.com/2024/11/20/war-in-season/

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David RL Moore

Thu 21st Nov 2024 06:27

Thanks for the likes to RBK, Aisha, RA Porter and Auracle.

Also to RA Porter and Auracle for their generous comments , much appreciated.

David RL Moore

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Auracle

Wed 20th Nov 2024 21:26

I think what you're doing is really relevant and important. I just can't prove it...

🌷The meter or rhythm is incredibly flowing. That is quite extraordinary, to keep that intact.

It captivates me, to further analyse your poem. Perhaps it's the video, with recitation and explanation included.🌷

I think what you're doing is really relevant and important. I just can't prove it...

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R A Porter

Wed 20th Nov 2024 18:24

I love this, such beautiful, lyrical imagery and linking the inevitability of the seasons to the inevitability of war is both poignant and timely.

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