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Botticelli’s Dreams

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Botticelli’s Dreams. 

He entered me like Spirit 
Landing on my heart
He blew my world apart
I loved him the daylight
I Loved him better in the dark

His velvet words
Soothed the jagged edges
I stood like Venus in the rain
Trembling as he possessed my veins

His passion filled my belly
With hurricanes and storms
I loved him ‘til I died
And rose like an angel
In Botticelli’s arms. 
Clare Kinnaird, 2024

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Clare

Sat 14th Dec 2024 10:42

Thank you all for the likes and comments. I enjoyed writing this, and I really appreciate your engagement. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Dec 2024 18:14

Brautiful.And not a wasted word.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 13th Dec 2024 10:29

And rose like an angel
In Botticelli’s arms.
That's beautiful, Clare.

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