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Edifice

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‘Put a brick in the edifice,’

Said the man climbing up the wall.

‘It will reach so high,

It will touch the sky,

Till the day it begins to fall.’

 

‘But what’s the point?’ I enquired,

‘If it ends up being destroyed?’

‘From out of the rubble

We’ll build back the double,

To make sure that we stay employed.’

 

‘That strikes me as strange,’ I replied.

‘Because it will to fall down again;

It’s certain to crumble,

And then take a tumble.

It’s surely a question of when.’

 

‘But time’s of the essence, you see;

We cheer each unbearable crash.

Our repeated rebuild

Means that years will be killed,

And we’ll go on raking in cash.’

ObsolesenceEconomicsSurrealism

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 20th Dec 2024 22:13

Everything runs down, breaks down or falls down. I even had my pacemaker replaced 'cause the batteries have a finite lifespan.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 19th Dec 2024 17:42

Thank you, Graham, Steve and RG. Perhaps everything is throwaway now, even (or especially) buildings., as you suggest, Graham. I guess that built-in obsolesence equals more money, plus all the horrifying consequences, Steve.

You've got a point, RG. Who will fall next?

And thanks to everyone who liked this.

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Reggie's Ghost

Thu 19th Dec 2024 12:54

Same is true of regimes.

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Steve White

Thu 19th Dec 2024 09:58

Thanks Stephen.

The terrifying reality of built-in obsolescence in the construction industry.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 19th Dec 2024 09:46

Is anything built to last these days, probably not! A rye comment on our throwaway, cheapened society.

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