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Men and Boys

The kiddie-giggling boy-men types,

Who shape our tastes and fuel our gripes,

Are like a zebra with no stripes.

Their views today are painted on;

Those of the past are long, long gone.

 

They rule the culture like machines,

And serve up, bite-sized, on our screens,

An option menu for our dreams.

The bad ones will be swept away;

Nice shall prevail day after day.

 

They pose in Paris and Berlin

And spread around their gurning grin,

But won’t take fortune on the chin;

They seek out somebody to blame

And turn to mud the victim’s name.

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Comments

Rolph David

Tue 7th Jan 2025 18:59

Stephen, I must say, your poem is an absolute masterpiece! You've captured the essence of contemporary "masculinity" and the superficiality of media "culture" with such precision and insight. The way you describe these "boy-men" shaping our world like machines, offering bite-sized dreams, is both sharp and thought-provoking. I couldn’t agree more with your critique of how modern identity has become performative and shallow, with niceness prevailing over substance. Your imagery is powerful, and the satire mixed with social commentary creates a piece that stays with the reader long after finishing. Truly brilliant work, Stephen! You’ve nailed the complexities of our time with such skill.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Jan 2025 10:44

Your last two lines sum up the situation well, Stephen.

“They seek out somebody to blame
And turn to mud the victim’s name.”

The headline before me reads: “Elon Musk’s dad says Tommy Robinson will be Prime Minister of England”.

Thousands of gullible people leading hopeless and directionless lives will currently be reading that, thinking: “yeah, bring it on, that’ll improve our lives”.

Your comment is spot on, Flyntland.

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Flyntland

Mon 6th Jan 2025 20:59


Telboy do people really want to be influenced or do they need guidance?

Or do they feel that they have no role in life and are trying to invent one?

I think that I have just persuaded myself that you are right - did you influence me?

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Telboy

Mon 6th Jan 2025 18:40

The principle of Supply and Demand is no different in the virtual world. For an influencer to be successful there needs to be thousands who wish to be influenced.

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John Coopey

Mon 6th Jan 2025 14:49

Influencers - Internet = Gossip

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Flyntland

Mon 6th Jan 2025 14:22

Stephen - I too saw this as an influencer and therefore dangerous.
Gullible young people, who lack direction for whatever reason, follow influencers blindly in their search for guidance.
Unfortunately, they are so malleable that they can become susceptible to dangerous mindsets.

It is so sad and I believe it could be avoided if there were more clubs where young people could be befriended by strong local leaders who could act as role models.
Not easy I know


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Graham Sherwood

Mon 6th Jan 2025 11:43

I didn’t read this as a political piece. I saw it as an influencer comment for which I have a particular issue!
For me the Influencer is the non-job of the 21st century and it disgusts me just how easily people are taken in by them!

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 6th Jan 2025 09:19

Thanks Stephen
Trouble is, a gullible electorate has allowed many of those "types" into power.
UK politics is infested with charlatans who tell blatant lie upon lie; they're allowed to get away with murder unchallenged by our bought and paid for mainstream media hacks.

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