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Beneath A Southern Sky

Far, far away beneath a southern sky

where unfamiliar stars shimmered on high

and Uluru loomed through the pale moonlight

Anangu tribesmen danced for our delight.

 

They danced a tale of how they’d live and die

far, far away beneath a southern sky

their history not based on written word

but verbally so everybody heard

 

a chronicle of sixty thousand years,

survived by means of boomerangs and spears,

far, far away beneath a southern sky,

with courage that these tribes personify.

 

So is their culture relevant today?

The world’s in such a mess, it’s hard to say;

but in the end the answers surely lie

far, far away beneath a southern sky.

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Telboy

Thu 9th Jan 2025 21:53

We never know if what we are seeing is authentic or just a show for tourists who have flown 10,000 miles to be slightly embarrassed at the intrusion.

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Trevor Alexander

Thu 9th Jan 2025 20:32

Thanks guys. And Flyntland, I guess it may have been a bit demeaning, but I think to some extent they looked on it as education. Another of the tribesmen during the same visit gave a talk on the history of the tribe, how they lived, divided up tasks etc. For example, grandparents taught the children because they believed parents hadn't learned enough yet.

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Flyntland

Thu 9th Jan 2025 20:00

I love this beautiful poem, it is deceptively simple and easy to read and contains a wealth of wisdom.
That being said "Anangu tribesmen danced for our delight" hurts.
Have we deprived them of their dignity and turned their sacred rituals into paid entertainment?

Would we find that acceptable in our culture?

I am a person who takes personal beliefs seriously and sets great value on privacy.

Perhaps I am just being a tad oversensitive but I feel that the mystery that we admire is being destroyed.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 9th Jan 2025 18:32

Thanks Trevor.
Long after we've become extinct, because we're unable exist without t'internet, and digital tech, those guys will still be following their "dreaming tracks", sustained by their songlines.

And we call this "progress"?

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