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Doublethink

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Thought is made manifest in the mark as a trace

but let me tell you about the trouble with traces

 

I rummage through life’s leftover marks

Traces from a previous exhibition

Text left on a wall,

plinths not yet been removed,

drawings now dumped in a corner as rubbish

I am for a poetry of embodied debris,

left in the aftermath

Speaking bodies caught

between memory and everyday life,

between private, public and pop-cultural history,

between present and absent

whilst recognising the crossfire of staying

in the comfort blanket of past violence

and possible future self-liberation

 

She left behind many scrapbook albums in her passing

Scrapbooks full of seaside postcards

of Britain making do with the beaches that we have

Postcard snapshots of a less cosmopolitan England,

Englishness and a nostalgia for an England

that may or may not have existed

but did at least in my mother’s mind

 

1990s pop music mixtapes and Chelsea football matches

I recorded off the radio onto cassette

Drawings I made by hand

in the late Eighties of a young Rupert Everett starring as

hunky schoolboy in Another Country (1984)

Embodied in every pencil mark:

desire, discomfort, emancipation, shame

Those drawn marks - traces of elegy indexical of

the person I once was,

the person I am proud I left behind,

and the person I wish I never had to be

 

Collapsing and combusting past and present,

these portals help connect us with the now gone

Conduits to access the absent, welcome or not

 

Mum’s memory objects, hidden from sight,

dormant in boxes for years,

prompted my own sea change in archive fever

Reanimate the archive

Use your own archive of the past

as calls for action in the present

Make traces and memory objects come alive again

Ventriloquist objects surviving fine without operator

 

I love rewinding my old mixtape cassettes

by hand with pencils through their eyes,

conjuring memories and traces in my mind

of people, places and things

with every turn

Each turn though, a doublethink,

sweet as first kiss

painful as first heartbreak

 

Traces become invitations

to be there again

in the here and now,

to feel exactly what it was like

to be in that place at that time

The moment is live

Will this invitation be one you accept?

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Comments

Rolph David

Sun 12th Jan 2025 13:10

Lee, your poem "Doublethink" is a profound meditation on memory, the traces left behind, and the complex relationships we have with the past. You bring to life the idea that traces—whether physical objects, snapshots, or sounds—are not just remnants of what has been, but powerful forces that shape how we experience the present. The way you speak of rummaging through these remnants, these "embodied debris," feels like a form of re-engagement with both personal and collective histories. You invite us to consider how memory is not static, but alive, constantly reshaping itself in our minds, intertwined with nostalgia, loss, and the longing to return to—or escape from—what once was.

Your references to mixtapes, postcards, and personal drawings are not just nostalgic, but deeply layered with emotion, offering windows into the self you were and the self you’ve become. The concept of "doublethink" beautifully captures the tension of revisiting these traces: they are sweet and painful, comforting and uncomfortable, as they force us to confront who we were and who we are now. I love the way you describe these traces as "invitations"—inviting us to be present in those moments again, but also challenging us to make sense of them in the now.

You’ve captured the essence of how we live between these two worlds: the one we’ve left behind and the one we’re still navigating. It’s a moving exploration of memory, identity, and the layers of time we carry with us. The archive, as you put it, becomes something alive, a place where past and present are in constant dialogue. Your poem gives those traces weight and power, asking us whether we’re ready to accept their invitation and engage with them once more. I hope I am correct in my interpretation and analysis. If not, please forgive my mental ‘encroachment’.

Great work!
Regards,
Rolph

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