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No Cake

Dark schemes, meticulously planned,

Those who understood, could not understand

The anniversary of her birth returned

Any thought or concern for others spurned

 

Mediocrity took her by the hand

Those who understood, could not understand

Readying herself for life’s divorce

Yearning to travel a different course

 

Prescription tablets relished though bland

Those who understood, could not understand

A distraught paramedic attended,

Attempting all as her darkness descended,

 

It seems senseless now to reprimand.

Those who understood, could not understand.

She had no reason, she had no care,

What in life did she consider to be so unfair?

 

As loving parents, we felt damned

Those who understood, could not understand

Though we cried she neither saw nor heard,

Green eyes dead, neither dimmed nor blurred.

 

There was no explanation, she couldn’t expand

Those who understood, could not understand

There was no breeze from life's last breath,

Nuzzled deep into the arms of death.

 

If only we could reverse the timers sand

Those who understood, could not understand

Our love for her was singularly exclusive

Did she consider her life unloved, to be unlived?

 

Seventeen years of nurture to adulthood

We fully believed that we understood 

Blowing birthday candles out today as planned 

But now she’s gone, we will never understand

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Flyntland

Tue 14th Jan 2025 09:22

Thank you for your response - I have written poems to mark personal heartbreaking situations and felt that you had done the same.
I repeat that this is a powerful poem and my reaction to it is a testament to your ability.
I feel more comfortable now to re-read it.

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 14th Jan 2025 06:46

This is not a personal experience but I tried to envision the worst moment for a parent having just read a news article on this theme.
This is also a metaphor for my life, as a young man learning, I had the world available to me, but made some wrong decisions that took me away from mine and my parents expectations a form of suicide that now sees me closer to death than life and not able to afford either. However all experiences have made me a richer, rounder person.

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Flyntland

Mon 13th Jan 2025 20:38

Oh! so powerful - every parent's dread put into words - I read it twice but that was enough, such deep sadness is difficult to absorb. I hope you did not write this for personal reasons please reassure me.

"Those who understood, could not understand" frequently repeated chills to the bone.

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